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afuturewithbees_com

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Our new site
« on: September 18, 2015, 09:52:17 pm »
Please check out our new sites and give us some feedback.

http://www.afuturewithbees.com

and

http://www.thebeeremover.com

TIA

Offline mikecva

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Re: Our new site
« Reply #1 on: September 19, 2015, 12:10:05 pm »
At first glance it looks good (although I am nor crazy about the advertising for dresses. Will look at it more later.  -Mike
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Offline Geoff

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Re: Our new site
« Reply #2 on: September 19, 2015, 08:12:24 pm »

   In the http://www.thebeeremover.com site the text on the black background very hard to read, otherwise a good job.

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Offline Dallasbeek

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Re: Our new site
« Reply #3 on: September 19, 2015, 08:27:00 pm »
You could use a good copy editor to check spelling, punctuation, etc.  Maybe a high school English teacher or something.  For the most part, it's fine, but for a site that will impress people, it could use some slight refinement

Otherwise, it's an attractive website and I wish you luck.  I sometimes travel through Springfield, so I might stop to see you if the timing is right.  Usually arrive there after dark, though.
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Re: Our new site
« Reply #4 on: September 23, 2015, 10:44:07 am »
Doesn't zoom or scroll left/right on my android phone.

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« Reply #5 on: September 23, 2015, 11:08:45 am »
Doesn't zoom or scroll left/right on my android phone.

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I had that problem on my iPad.  Turned t sideways and I could read the whole line.  Otherwise, no.
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